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Nov. 6. Dragon Tongue

Dragon Tongue Let’s say you've just discovered green dragonswhere no green dragons have grown before,the pale hood of the spathe, protruding spadix. Something you don't want to acknowledge,but can't...

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Re: Nov. 6. Dragon Tongue

First stanza is too die good, Toni!

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Re: Nov. 6. Dragon Tongue

spathe and spadix... mmm. not cottoning to that break on come--but it might be an my old maid thing.yep. probably.

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Re: Nov. 6. Dragon Tongue

Alison, I'm not liking it either. If I keep this, will tone down -- or maybe completely change -- that third stanza. Just drafting. . . .

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Re: Nov. 6. Dragon Tongue

wow! you're really rolling now, Toni I'm sure you'll get this one under control and it will shine. Mar

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Re: Nov. 6. Dragon Tongue

woah - what the heck Toni! Loved this, am totally curious as to it's inner meanings - that final strophe! well, any time we use the word 'thrust' alongside something repetitivebut wait, perhaps the...

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